Diziah DLO thinking hats debono T3W5 2015.

Hi everyone today for writing I had to complete a DLO and use our school values and I hope you like it please comment.

Anzac poppies 2015

Hi everyone here is my photos of the poppies hope you like it please comment. WAL: About anzac day.

Thank you soldiers we really appreciated what you have done in the war for our country.

Jims letter

Question poem T1W8 2015

Hi everyone here is my question poem hope you like it please comment.

Who are you?

Are you someone that just walks away and doesn’t help anyone that has needed something?

Or are you someone that works for others? How are you a hero? How do you help from others in danger? Are you someone that hurts peoples feelings and that lets them down? And what have you done to help people that have needed other stuff. Are you intelligent or brave to do something for someone that couldn’t even do what they were suppose to do? Are you someone that has bad behaviour or good behaviour?  What type of hero are you are you someone that hasn’t done anything for anyone? Or are you just someone who likes to lie to people about what you are going to do for them? Are you someone that isn’t always respectful to others?

How would you save the world from getting damaged?

Are you someone that makes people burst into tears without helping them? Are you someone that has ever fighten others without giving them a hand at something? Or are you just a disgraceful bully that you have just left someone out from another group to let the other one that was left out feel stink? Are you someone that makes people feel left out?  

Do you work for people that you don’t know?

Are you someone that looks after people when they are hurt?

Or are you someone that just makes others feel dumb and hurtful? And are you someone that has powers to hurt people that are so in danger? Are you someone that just breaks into someone's life to push them away. Do you fight for someones life and give up on your familys life? Are you someone that is bad or not? And what are you? Are you a hero or are you someone else that doesn’t like to help others?

Are you a hero saving someone's life?

Are you someone that saved the world?

Are a guy that runs away when seeing a person that is

getting  beat up.

Are you a person that takes risk?

What have you done to save the world.

What have you done to save somebody's life.

What have you done to make somebody happy.

What have you done to save your family.

Why did you hit your friend when you got jealous of him.

Why did you hit somebody that was being a hero

And are you someone that is brave and harmful to do d anything that other people might want you to do.

Are you someone that holds someone down for the others to beat them up or are you someone that cares for someone else that is hurt in another island? Are you someone who gives your personality or not?

And are you someone that could give someone anything that they have wanted for years or are you someone that leaves someone alone when they must of been in danger.

What if you beat someone up that you have never met and never knew would you have feelings good about doing that or not? What if I came up to you and said hey you just leave that person she is just trying to help you but you wouldn’t let her just let her help you.

Are you someone that makes other peoples lives stand out on a country or are you someone that brings others to safety and that looks after them. Are you someone that gives all your love to one person and not your family?

Or are you someone that hasn’t helped anyone that hasn’t had help before or not? Do you live for life and survive when there is an earthquake? Are you someone who fights for your own life and doesn't get away with what you're already doing?

Or are you someone that fights for someone elses life?

Do you have anyway that you can help our world from stopping to get damaged?

Why have you been making others feel sad for their own selves? Are you someone that gives bad behaviour to someone you didn’t even know or not?

What kind of hero are you?

Are you a hero that lets people down?

Are you a hero that thinks of making good choices or bad choices? Are you someone that doesn’t listen to what anyone is saying to you? How did you become a hero?

And why did you become a hero for? Do you take risks and give up for your whole life?

Pied piper description google drawing T1W8 2015

Hi everyone this is a description we were making a interesting story about
the pied piper we had to use some of the adjectives from the pied piper adjective slide.

Pied piper description T1W8 2015

Pied Piper.

One day walking through a dark and scary forest was the mayor that was wearing a black coat with white polka dots he was glaring down the floor like he wasn’t anywhere to be seen but as he looked up a mountain he could see the kids with the greedy bossy pied piper blowing his instrumental then suddenly the mayor called out. Hey pied piper where do you think your going with those kids. Then the pied piper had looked up on the mountain then he suddenly saw the mayor and as he saw the mayor the bossy pied piper had to tell the kids that he were with trickling down the steep mountain to run but as they ran the mayor said to them to not go away but they kept on running.

Then when they ran all the way to the place where it was tidy the pied piper laughed then the mayor returned to the place where it was cleaned and the kids were so happy because now that they had a safe place to live. And then the pied piper grinned with unfairness and said how dear you take those kids away from me. Then they lived happily ever after.

Letter to Santa.

Dear Santa   

How are you? I hope there is a good weather at north pole and that there is heaps of snow to play in  and I have been good by cleaning up my room when it’s a mess and I tidy outside and pick up all of the rubbish and put a cookie and a drink of  milk next to where the chimney is and put the christmas tree next to where the chimney is and I put decorations on it to make it lovely and beautiful so you can put our presents under the christmas tree.

Paragraph 1: Hi Santa I hope it is a lovely and good weather in the north pole and that you are busy buying the presents that we want for christmas and I have been helping my family by cleaning my own room and to do the dishes everyday I come back from school.

paragraph 2: And when I come back from school I clean up and then I ask my mum if I could go to my friends but she says no so I just start putting the washing on the line and then I go back inside and clean my mummys room and the lounge up while she’s not at home and I suprise her for what I’ve done.

Paragraph 3: And whenever it starts to be christmas we will put you some cookie and a milk on a plate for you then we will get the christmas tree decorated then we will put them next to the chimney so you can eat the cookies drink the milk and put the presents that we wanted and needed under the christmas tree.

For christmas I want and need woody from toy story Jessie from toy story and buzz light year from toy story please and then I would please want cookie bear cookies and 2 mince and cheese pie and some sunscreen and a acer chrome netbook for school so I could do my work on it.

William Tunbridge.

Hi everyone this is my William Tunbridge piece of writing of diving.

Vocaroo with poem.

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Hi everyone this is my vocaroo with my poem enjoy it.

The bad thing that little red riding hood did to the pig and the wolf.

Name: Red Riding Hood.

Crime: Little red riding hood killed the wolf so it could be her coat then she killed the pig and made a bag out of the pigs skin.

Description: Red riding hood looks horrible and selfish.

Where: At the pigs house.

When:  25th July Week 5

WARNING: Do not approach to where she is because you might get killed.

Wanted background.

Hello everyone this is red riding hood getting her pistol ready to shoot the horrible and aggressive wolf that was trying to attack her but the wolf didn't attack her when it suddenly just shot it deadly then the pig came up and little red riding hood took the pigs skin of and made it into a bag.

Tiger snapshot.

Letter to Nick Smith Week 5 Term 3

DEAR MR SMITH

Introduction:

Hi Mr Smith  I am letting you know that

the beautiful Maui dolphins are plummeting there numbers and we need you to

help us to get the beautiful Maui dolphin’s survived.And we need your help to

tell heaps of people to stop trawl fishing. Do you know why the Maui dolphins are dying?

We need your help by you telling all of the people to stop trawl fishing and stop killing

the beautiful Maui dolphins in the world. because did you know that all of the

Maui dolphins are dying because many people are killing them and the Maui dolphins

can not survive when people are killing them.

The government is killing them so that there will be no more maui dolphins left there were only one thousand maui dolphins now look how much more there is now there are only 55

maui dolphins left in the whole world.We want your help for the maui dolphins to stop

plummeting the numbers of the maui dolphins are dying. Do you know why they are dying?

Conclusion:

Can you please help us make the maui dolphins survive.

The dangers in the ocean can make the maui dolphins extincted.

Can you tell all the people in new zealand to stop trawl fishing and could you ban trawl

fishing.

It is killing the maui dolphins and all of the maui dolphins can’t see any nets in the water

so they swim in it and they get drowned then dye.

Can you tell all the people in new zealand to stop trawl fishing and could you ban trawl

fishing.

Maui's Dolphins Week 6 Term 3

This is a maui's dolphin picture.

FANGTOOTH WEEK 3 TERM 3

Fangtooth

Fangtooth are fish that are the ugliest fish in the world they are the big tooth fish that swim in the deep sea they are the ones that could eat people even when the people wanted to fish for them.

Fangtooths are fish of the family Anoplogasteridae that live in the deep sea with other sea creatures.They are the similar fish in the deep water.And they are the bravest fish in the world they are also strong fish more than the others in the deep sea.

And the Fangtooth are the best fish that people could eat at home but sometimes they can’t eat it because it my smell like salty water that people have never tasted long ago.

They are the greek anopolos that mean they could be a gaster or anything the Fangtooth are the thing that live in a big tank but they also could live in the dark water because they are trying to act that they are the strongest fish than every fish in the world.

And the Fangtooth are the dangerous sea animals that people would not want to touch because they are to ugly and to weak as the little nemo fish.

Fangtooths are also dangerous because they are the naughtiest fish that when people tell them to do what they are supposed to do but they actually don’t listen and don’t even want to do what their told.

This is what i have been working on. By Diziah Heremaia.

Why is the ocean special? week 2 term 3

This is what i have worked on for my writing this week please leave a comment.

The ocean is special to me because it gives us heaps of fish so that we could eat it and it is also special because it can also let us have some other animals in the ocean.

The ocean is special to me because it  lets us swim in it and it is also special to me because it can give us lots of food and plants.And the ocean is also special because it gives us heaps of energy.

And the ocean is also special because it can give us sharks to cut and have for dinner and it is also mostly special because it also wants us to look after it and keep it.
And the ocean can give us heaps of things that we wished and also that is in the sea can be some pearls in the clamb like a shell.
It is also special because it is very different.
This is my ocean story that i have been talking about.

Writing goal sheets week 2 term 3

Hi everyone this is my goal sheets i have finished it and could you please leave a comment to my blog.
Thank you.

A letter to miss kelly week 8 term 2

Dear Miss Kelly

Did you seen a giraffe some where he has a yellow body and heaps of brown spots and he has got brown hair and brown ears and his name is Wally and we can’t find him and someone has written a letter for us if we want him back and we do want him back.

He is a good giraffe because he always lets one of us take him home for the weekends so they can go on an adventure and spend time taking photos of our family smiling with Wally.

He likes doing things like maths and reading and writing he also likes playing outside with people but normally we don’t take Wally outside this time because it might rain and he might get wet and silky. And drips might drop on the floor so that's why we don’t normally take Wally outside to play with us on the park or on the field to play relays at lunch time.