I am a Year 6 student at Tamaki Primary School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 7 and my teacher is Miss Shiriwastow.
Hi Diziah, I'm happy to see that you got some daily five writing up. I think you need to add more detail to your story. Who is gumball? What is he? You could tell your audience a little more about him.
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Hi Diziah, I'm happy to see that you got some daily five writing up. I think you need to add more detail to your story. Who is gumball? What is he? You could tell your audience a little more about him.
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